Another revision

For this week’s reading task, we were given the challenge of reviewing our fellow students' feedback on our blog. I chose to have my blog on “Active reading” reviewed. We had to take that feedback, review our original blog, and rewrite our blog. I received only one comment on my blog which was all very positive and basically said my blog was perfect? So, what am I supposed to do with that comment? Well, I chose to look over my blog myself and see if I needed to change anything. I decided to change the photo so that it stood out a bit more, then I decided to justify my paragraphs to make them appear more uniform, then I played around with the font size and style. When I was finished changing font etc. I re-read my blog and decided that I should add more to the last bit, where originally, I had ended on one line. I decided I should add another paragraph here because the blog sort of ended abruptly. I wasn’t sure what else to do because you must be careful not to fill up your blog with lots of useless information, so I needed to step back, re-read again, spell check, and know when to stop! (Writing a paper revising, 2021) (Home page, 2021)

Bibliography

Home page. (2021). Retrieved from University of Manchester: https://www.phrasebank.manchester.ac.uk/

Writing a paper revising. (2021). Retrieved from Walden University: https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/writingprocess/revising