Revising writing
Surprisingly I liked getting feedback on my blog for Study skills, it meant that when it came time for me to rewrite that piece, I could use the comments left on my blog to revise what I had previously wrote and change it to make it better. When I wrote my Study skills blog, originally, I wasn’t really used to writing blogs or attaching photos, so I attached my photo with too much information and it didn’t look well, so I got a chance to change my photo this week, which is great. I only received one comment on my blog, and it was mainly positive comments about the overall layout and how it flowed correctly so I didn’t really have to change that much. Kailan suggested that I expand on some of my definitions so that is what I implemented, and it does sound better with a longer description. I would have loved if I had received more feedback from other students because it would have given me more to work with, it feels like I didn’t really do much because all I did was expand definitions from my original work and I am not sure if this is the correct thing to do?
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